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NORTH EAST ESSEX THEATRE GUILD

SHOWCASE FESTIVAL 2003-2004

ADJUDICATION

Group: Brantham Amateur Theatrical Society
Venue: Brantham Village Hall
Date of Adj: Tuesday 17th February
Production: The Pied Piper of Hamelin by Joyce Blane, Andy Kimber and Neil Murphie

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INTRODUCTION
FRONT OF HOUSE
LIGHTING AND SOUND
SET DESIGN AND CONSTRUCTION
COSTUMES
MUSIC
CHOREOGRAPHY
PERFORMANCES
SUMMARY

 

INTRODUCTION

Having now watched several Pantomimes I was looking forward to seeing something different and having received the script to read, I knew this was going to be different. Do not get me wrong, I love Pantomimes; they are for the most part magical, being a mixture of fairy stories and legends and full of mythical figures. The Pied Piper of Hamelin according to your authors has its feet firmly fixed in the genre of fairy tales, but I was surprised to learn that there may be some factual information that this story was based on. It is a very moral tale that is still relevant in this day and age; anyone not fulfilling their promises will rue the day by being punished, why don't politicians ever listen? It is quite a drive from Colchester to Brantham, but it is a nice hail, old fashioned in design but very useable I would imagine. The atmosphere was very friendly, the audience was chatting to one another and the children were getting quite excited looking forward to the production about to begin. So amidst the rattle of sweet papers and crisp eating the magic of a live stage performance began and as the story wove its way round the audience quietened and became involved.


FRONT OF HOUSE

There was a very warm welcome from the box office ladies, plenty of programme sellers and very pleasant raffle ticket vendors. The raffle tickets are nicely printed and will be drawn on the last night of the production; an impressive list of prizes was also supplied.
The programme was also very attractively presented, lots of information on the story, the players and production team, all this information was clearly printed and I was grateful for it. There is a bar available at the hall, dispensing alcoholic drinks and refreshments during the interval, it seemed it was very well patronized (more crisps for the children). Music was played during the interval and pre-curtain of a medieval style, setting the right atmosphere and expectation. The Bat spotlight on the closed curtains all added to the professionalism of this group.


LIGHTING AND SOUND

I have to admit to having no knowledge of anything vaguely technical, so I am limited in explaining myself clearly in this section. To me the lighting of this show was some of the best I have seen this season. Bright "day" light was used for the outside scenes and slightly different for inside the Council Chamber. The clever part was the changes made for certain pieces of action. Whenever the Pied Piper appeared the lights changed to red, when he played his pipes blue and white shades made it very magical and when the Rats appeared the lights flashed and dimmed giving them lots of impact. A mirror-ball was used to good effect, as was the follow spot for the songs and the action at the mountainside opening. When the Piper threatened the Council the lights flashed and a very loud heartbeat was heard, this was very effective. I noticed that nearly everyone was using a microphone for speaking as well as singing; was this necessary for such a small hall? There was very little interference heard considering the amount of microphones used, so well done to the team juggling with them. Congratulations to the lighting and sound technicians, the result of your hard work was as near to professionalism as any amateur group can achieve.


SET DESIGN AND CONSTRUCTION

On first impressions when the curtains were closed, Tudor style buildings could be seen at the side of the stage, a small dockside was stage right and a lifelike constructed mountainside with an opening on stage left. The first set was of the Town Square of Hamelin. The Council Buildings were at the rear, with an impressive pair of wooden double doors opening from middle back. The other main set was the interior of the building, the Council Chamber; this was a wooden effect panelled room with a large picture of the Burgermeister prominently displayed on the wall. A large table covered in an impressive cloth with five colour co-ordinated chairs behind. A table stage right was piled with huge brightly coloured books, a very good dressing for this scene. The Mountainside was a very realistic construction of rock with a workable entrance, when used this opening was filled with smoke causing an eerie effect. This was a well-constructed collection of sets with good doors and realistic and attractive designs. Some of the scene changes were a little noisy, obvious only because there was no other action going on.


COSTUMES

Of mainly a medieval style the costumes were beautifully designed and made. The problem I had with them was the plain material and the lack of colour used. There were so many greys, browns, beiges and dark blues I was a little disappointed with the effect. The Burgermeister looked very regal in his maroon coat trimmed with fur and some gold frogging and bejewelled collar, his hat looked magnificent in brown fur and maroon trim and with his white stockings and buckled shoes he cut a fine figure. His wife Hilde was nicely gowned in blue with a red overdress and an impressive white upstanding headdress. Their daughter Anna wore a lovely dress of blue with lurex sleeves, a plain underskirt and some more fur trim, her headdress was very flattering, a band with a back veil. Her loved one Hans is a poor farmer, this was clearly depicted by his costume, a beige sacking-like top with brown tights and sweet brown boots. The Town Clerk was seriously dressed in black with a lovely four cornered hat, very officious looking. The Councillors looked good in their matching maroon gowns with black breeches and white stockings. Klutz looked deliciously dirty and grimy in his sacking top and torn tights, his hood gave his character an untrustworthy air. Even the Pied piper's costume, although colourful, was not bright, the red was but the gold was dull, the design of his costume was inspired, his jacket was quilted half red, half gold and this corresponded with his tights, shoes and hat. Very effective. The Townspeople's outfits were nice, but some variation of material or patterns would have made them more attractive to look at, the same goes for the children's outfits. The Mice outfits were good, black leotards and tights with hoods and tails. The Rat make-up was very good and looked attractive. When they were dressed their smart hairstyles with the single plait looked neat and well coordinated. Overall the effect of the costumes was of style and good design but for me lacking in colour.


MUSIC

The music used was fabulous, I could have listened to it for ages, but in relation to this production I found it a little solemn and heavy. Written by Andy Kimber it was in the medieval style and great to listen to, the pipe playing was particularly lovely and mesmerising in content. Of the musical numbers I particularly liked, the pompous rendition of The Burger's Gavotte was very amusing. I also liked both the duets sung by Hans and Anna, both were love songs with a touch of sadness in the second, the Farewell Duet. There was some nice singing in what seemed to me some fairly difficult musical numbers. My only disappointment was that all the music was pre-recorded; possibly it was too complicated to reproduce live. I would like to add that many of the productions I have adjudicated this season have used pre-recorded music I think this is such a shame as live music adds so much to the atmosphere. Whether this is a modern trend or there is a shortage of musicians willing to give up their time I do not know, but I think it may be the later. A C.D. of the music was offered for sale, I do hope lots of people take up this offer, as the music deserves recognition.


CHOREOGRAPHY

The children did most of the dancing, as themselves a short dance with the maypole was an attractive touch. When they were Rats they moved with intent of mischief, circular movements and threatening gestures, showing their nasty characters clearly. The adults moved with grace and lyrical steps, the ladies that is, the gentlemen Councillors looked very pompous and amusing in their Gavotte. It was a pity there was not more dancing in this production, or that the dances themselves were not longer in content, I felt they were over almost before they had begun. This would have added so much more variety and a lighter touch to the overall finished production.


PERFORMANCES

BURGERMEISTER GERHARDT GROBERFEHLER (Richard Heath)
As officious, pompous money-grabbing leader of the Council Richard was well cast. His body language was good, conveying all the things we love to hate in our politicians. His dialogue, however, I found a little flat, not enough light and shade vocally. There was a little sparkle of humour there but it needed nurturing and expanding as it was almost lost in Richard's straight-faced characterisation, but he did do pomposity so well.


HILDE (Angie Heath)
I could not quite make up my mind whether Hilde was a nagging snob or a kindly earth mother figure. Mind you putting up with her husband's nonsense would make anyone nag! A good clear speaking voice with good volume control balanced the two halves of her character beautifully, quite a difficult role to play, portrayed well by Angie. Her involvement with the townspeople and children brought out the kindly half of her character, quite the little Jekyll and Hyde on the quiet.


ANNA (Pippa Revell)
Pippa was a very attractive heroine, a lovely, animated face, enviable figure and a nice clear voice. Pippa moved with confidence. Her character was believable, she definitely knows her heroines and how they behave when in love. A nice singing voice that showed to advantage in her second duet with Hans. The emotion she was feeling clearly showed in her singing and dialogue at this time. A nice performance from this young lady.


HANS MEYER (Grant Borroff)
Blessed with a great voice and handsome visage Grant's hero would make any maiden's heart flutter. Grant did not look completely at ease on the stage and at times he dropped the volume of his dialogue, so it was lost. His singing, however, was rich and deep and with this he was confident and sure. Just inject a little of that assurance in the role portrayal and you have a great all-round performance.


TOWN CLERK (Richard Lewis)
This was a clear picture of an official caught between two evils, trying to balance the books whilst keeping the money-grabbing Councillors happy. Richard's character was amusing when he was hypnotised by the Pied Piper and changed instantly into quite a different persona; an assured performance from an experienced player well worth watching.


COUNCILLORS (Kevin Knight, Keith Raby, Jim Dillon and Phil Greenwood)
These four gentlemen fulfilled the roles of the hopeless and hapless members of the Council well. Each with their own quirks of personality, like the sleeping Gunther (overdone make-up though) and the ever-foolish Johann. While being members of the Chorus of Townspeople they played an important part of this show.


KLUTZ (Steve Hutley)
What a glorious, dirty, disgusting creature Klutz the local rat catcher was. Steve appeared to enjoy himself immensely, the role giving him an opportunity to let himself go and be as unpleasant and awful as he so desired. His cringing, flea-ridden persona brought humour and much amusement to an otherwise sombre story.


MARTHE, GRETA, LIESL and THE SCHOOLMISTRESS (Lesley Raby, Gill Clarke, Sandra Dillon and Mags Humphrey)
These ladies worked hard with the Chorus singing, they had some dialogue and graceful movement in their dance. They complained long and hard about the Rats, their husbands and the loss of their children, the complaints about their husbands bringing some laughter from the audience. Very pleasant to watch they were all animated, clearly spoken with some good singing voices, well done ladies.


HERR SAUBER (Ian Southgate)
Another officious official, Herr Sauber is the local health and safety expert. Ian's expressive facial expressions were good, his work with the Chorus useful.


THE PIED PIPER (James Clark)
James looked every inch the magical figure he was portraying; he certainly knows his music as the miming with the pipe was very convincing (or did he play this on the recording?) This was not a completely confident performance as James looked at the floor much of the time and I felt he could have made his dialogue more dramatic, this would have made more impact. His singing, however, was more confident and with a good, tuneful voice that was very good to listen to, James also has lovely expressive and artistic hands. A magical character, a little understated in my opinion.

FRANZ (Jason Pembroke)
Jason made the most of his cameo role, being the only child left in the village on account of his crippled limb, he was sorrowful and wistful of joining his friends and companions; a nice, confident performance from this young man.


KLAUS and GRETCHEN (Jake and Danielle Hutley)
These two youngsters spoke their dialogue clearly and obviously enjoyed their small cameo roles, well done both of you.


CHILDREN and RATS
This small group of youngsters were enthusiastic and energetic; they threw themselves into the river with abandon when they were Rats. Their dance was effective, their squeaks very vocal. When they marched off behind the Pied Piper it was well choreographed and performed, their hypnotised state clearly outlined. Good work carried out with enthusiasm by this group of young people.


SUMMARY

I really did enjoy this production, but for some reason found it a little lacking in magic. I cannot exactly put my finger on what was missing, sorry that is no help to you, perhaps whatever it was it corrected itself by the end of the week. The direction was tight and disciplined, the cast certainly looked as if they enjoyed themselves, I do not think the script had enough humour in it, I know of course the story itself is quite dark, but it needed a 1ighter touch. The same goes for the music, which I thought was great, but a little solemn. There were some lovely touches of magic when the Pied Piper did his stuff, but even this was a little understated. Thank you very much for the script, I enjoyed reading it and found it very informative. I feel that in this production you aimed for realism but the children in the audience and I wished you had perhaps included a little more fantasy. Congratulations to all who contributed to this musical play, I enjoyed it and thought it was very professionally produced

Best wishes to you all and thank you for inviting me.

Anne Sexton